Friday, November 11, 2011

More tips for Part D

I found this on the web today. It features more detailed instructions to the one page hand out I gave you guys on Wednesday. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE start thinking about Part D before we head to the computer lab on Tuesday. I hope this helps. 



Suggested Format of Section D

Paragraph 1 - Historical Context

Write a paragraph demonstrating your understanding of the issue in its historical context. What events were going on in the United States (or world) during the scope of your investigation that may have led to underlying assumptions or points of view on this issue that you will break down and analyze in this section?  

Paragraph 2 - Significance of Sources from C

Write a paragraph or two that demonstrates your awareness of the significance of the sources you evaluated in Part C. Make critical comments on evidence from those sources that could help answer your research question.

Paragraph 3 - Critical examination of one possible answer

Write a paragraph or two that examines evidence from part B that could lead to one possible answer to or interpretation of your research question. Here it is essential you make critical comments based on your evidence. Discuss cause-and-effect relationships, underlying assumptions and any interrelationships that are related to the evidence you presented.

Paragraph 4 - Critical examination of a different interpretation 
  
Write a paragraph or two that examines evidence from part B that could lead to a different possible answer or interpretation to your research question. Here it is essential you make critical comments based on your evidence. Discuss cause-and-effect relationships, underlying assumptions and any interrelationships that are related to the evidence you presented.

Paragraph 5 - Laying  foundation for conclusion

Write a paragraph that considers the above interpretations and starts to transition toward what you think your conclusion will say. Start laying the foundation for your conclusion.




Examples

To make it clear that you are placing your topic within its historical context, literally spell it out by writing, "This investigation is important in its historical context because ___________"

Examples of historical context: 

Stalin established collectivization and the five-year plans because of the very real threat of foreign invasion during the 1920s and 30s. 


 To what extent did Stalin's Five-Year Plans improve Russia’s military?

This investigation is important in its historical context because Stalin's motivation to correct the problems with Russia's military came simply from the fact that he feared other countries, due to Russia’s previous failures from World War I. Russia had lost many soldiers due to Russia’s unequipped military, such as the 200,000 casualties in the Battle of Masuria. As Stalin wrote about industrializing for military purposes in the Pravda, “We must make good this distance in ten years. Either we do it, or we shall be crushed.


Other examples involving topics from American history:
topic: Progressive Era
1. The American Progressive reform movement to establish laws to eliminate child labor gained momentum in the early 1900s as a result of the rapid, un-checked growth of industry from 1870 and 1900. 



topic: US foreign policy in the 19th century:
2. U.S. business interest in the Hawaiian Islands was fueled in part because of its natural resources, but militarily, the young U.S. navy wanted control of the island before the British Empire took it to maintain trade between Australia and British Columbia.

7 Comments:

Blogger willy said...

Thanks Carlisle, this actually really helps. It took away some of the confusion, and questions that i had.

4:38 PM

 
Blogger Mr. Carlisle said...

Good deal. This section requires a lot of thought.

5:19 PM

 
Blogger Christian Wong said...

Thanks for the tips. I appreciate it, sir.

10:26 PM

 
Anonymous Thomas W. 3rd period said...

makes things clearer. thanks

5:21 PM

 
Blogger Sara Golestaneh said...

Thank you for posting this. I was extremely confused.

1:01 PM

 
Blogger Mr. Carlisle said...

I'm going to present this tomorrow and give everyone a hard copy as well. Glad it helps.

1:17 PM

 
Anonymous Haylee Winden said...

Thank you Carlisle! This helps a lot!

3:25 PM

 

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